It’s Charlotte here, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I think that it’s great that you are taking a part of the Summer Learning Journey this summer!
I think it is great that you have already completed this task, and it is awesome that you were able to include a link to the blog post where you made your xylophone!
It would be fantastic if you could include a bit more of an explanation of the task, and how you had already done it previously - this will help your readers understand and will make sure that you get the points you deserve!
As for your previous post from a couple months ago, I cannot view the video! Could you please share this file ‘Anyone on the internet with this link can view’ so everyone can see it on your blog! I would love to have a look at it.
Mōrena Roman,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I think that it’s great that you are taking a part of the Summer Learning Journey this summer!
I think it is great that you have already completed this task, and it is awesome that you were able to include a link to the blog post where you made your xylophone!
It would be fantastic if you could include a bit more of an explanation of the task, and how you had already done it previously - this will help your readers understand and will make sure that you get the points you deserve!
As for your previous post from a couple months ago, I cannot view the video! Could you please share this file ‘Anyone on the internet with this link can view’ so everyone can see it on your blog! I would love to have a look at it.
Meri Kirihimete for tomorrow!
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey