Jim was very hungry. Inside the fridge was food. Greedy Jim ate it. Frighten by a bug crawling out of the fridge, Jim ran away as fast has he could. Jim's mum said "come out of that bush". When Jim came in, Jim's mum got a big knife and killed the bug. While Jim was walking back to the fridge he slipped in some water.
I love the imagery of Greedy Jim! Nice imagination with the selected words. We might have to make a drawing of what we think Jim looks like~! :P)
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