“Finally we actually broke the wall to paradise”. “I have been waiting for this day for like a week”. “Come on, let's go through before someone sees us”. “Wow that water is cold man”. It's good since we have been cooked alive in there”. “Oi kids what are you doing” “That's the po po we gotta go swimming now.” We came all this way to make the best sandcastles in the world. We ain’t gonna stop now. “Man, I thought we were gonna make it without any trouble.” “Well I guess we're on the run now.” “This is it paradise”.
Awesome idea for your story! Each time a person says something new put it on to a new line
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